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Wes Kao argues that being concise gets misunderstood in three key ways. First, conciseness isn't about word count—a 1,500-word memo can be concise while a 150-word one can be fluffy. The real measure is density and economy of language. Second, asking someone to "be more concise" shouldn't be used as an excuse to avoid engaging with genuinely complex topics that require detail and context. Third, some ideas literally can't be simplified further without becoming misleading, just like you can't reduce the fraction 11/32 any more. The actual goal is effectiveness and reducing cognitive load, not brevity for its own sake.
The core bottleneck to being concise isn't tactics—it's clear thinking. Kao realized that common advice like "put the bottom line up front" or "don't bury the lede" all assume you've already figured out what your main point actually is. That's the hard part. If your ideas come out messy and rambling, it's usually because you're still working through what you believe. The fix isn't more writing tricks but taking time to clarify your thinking first, whether that's bouncing ideas off a colleague or writing things down to force yourself to organize them.
To actually be more concise, Kao recommends two concrete moves. First, figure out your main point by processing information, deciding what matters, organizing it, and saying it aloud—steps that are hard to do simultaneously, which is why stream-of-consciousness talking produces rambling. Even a few seconds of prep helps: ask what you want from the meeting, what's most important, and what action you need. Second, aim to state your thesis in exactly 2-3 sentences. One sentence creates paralysis trying to find perfection, while ten sentences spirals into a monologue. The 2-3 sentence target forces you to hit your high-level point and what you actually need from the other person.
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